沪江中学语音公开课:中考英语作文阅卷心得

所属专题:中考英语作文  来源:沪江中学学科网    要点:沪江中学语音公开课  
编辑点评: 英语作文到底怎么提高?中考英语阅卷中有哪些”内幕“?中考英语作文中有哪些雷区碰不得?近日,昂立中高考名师吴争老师为我们分享了中考英语作文阅卷心得,下面是本次公开课的视频,错过的同学们快来回顾吧!

英语作文到底怎么提高?中考英语阅卷中有哪些”内幕“?中考英语作文中有哪些雷区碰不得?近日,昂立中高考名师吴争老师为我们分享了中考英语作文阅卷心得,下面是本次公开课的视频,错过的同学们快来回顾吧!

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官方评分标准

8+8+4

1. 内容分8分。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚,完整。

2. 语言分8分。学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误,每个扣0.5,动词重要大错误扣1分,重复错误不计;标点错误每4个扣0.5。

3. 组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。

实际评分标准

1. Global scoring 整体评分

2. 字数问题: 80-90 最佳 105以上啰嗦/心情烦躁/影响评分 60字以下/直接扣内容分 扣分3-4分

3. 要点问题:以下要点仅供参考,不包括不会直接扣分。不要受到要点干扰,实际考生中,不包括任何一条得高分非常少。

Guided Writing:是个提示,给学生扩展思路 
中考/高考/四六级作文都是guided Writing
中考作文内容有时候与雅思口语Part 2 topic Card相似

4. 特殊案例:白卷0分 与本文无任何关系的作文6分为最高分  

5. 总体印象分是一把双刃剑。不能为了写总体印象分,用所谓难词,结果发生语法错误,扣语言分,还要扣总体印象分。

何为总体印象分

有气势,有腔调,适合中学老师口味,不能高于他们的认知标准
10年前 when I was five, I listened to radio.
5年前 try to do sth, stop doing
现在 I am a boy who is keen on music
Do all the possible means to do sth
Certainly, I will…
For the reason that
Only by ….can we …
I am deeply convinced that
Take up painting 

6. 一模二模考试写作“严禁”满分

评卷流程:

1. 电脑阅卷:2人一组, 组长台上监控,两人分值不能相差太大(≤4分),超过额定分值退回重新批改。

2. 阅卷速度:2-3分钟一篇 (要求),一般不能超过5分钟, 阅卷勤劳者同时评卷准确者给予表扬。

教师实际阅卷重点:

1. 首句。首句出错,印象非常糟糕
2. 连接词/逻辑
3. 未句
4. 内容/例子
5. 模版使用/套题

Write at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for “
图片省略
School activity/high school study/summer holidays future job
Use the following points as a reference.(以下问题仅供参考)
What is your plan about? What have you planned ?
Why do you have such a plan? How are you going to do it ?
What result do you expect?

My plan for the summer holidays
I am a girl who is keen on travelling. As a junior three student, I don’t have too much spare time now , so I want to go travelling during my summer holidays. For me, I’ve planned to go to Japan, simply because travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest and enrich my life. What’s more, I can make a large circle of friends there. I am going to get ready for this travelling . I hope that my summer holidays will be meaningful and colorful.
(8+8+3)=19

My plan for future job
According to my mother “A good job makes people confident”. I think so. I want to be an engineer, because if I see my own building , I will be proud of myself. But there is a saying “No pains, no gains”. So is my point. First , it is important that I should learn physics well. Then I should collect different experice. Finally confidence must be full of my heart. To cut a long story, the harder I get, the shorter between facts and goal.
(7+7+1) 

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