2015上海中考英语作文范文三(I want to invent_______)

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编辑点评: 2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕,今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。下文是范文,大家可参考~

I want to invent a kind of medicine

If you ask me what I want to invent? I will say a kind of medicine which can cure cancer.As we all know, many people suffer from cancer and die at a very young age these years. For this, countless families lost their beloved family members, then feel painful for the rest of their lives. What a terrible thing it is! So, doing something quickly for them is rather necessary, I’d like to devote my life to it!

精彩亮点分析:

亮点一:条件状语从句,主将从现,引出中心思想。

亮点二:at a very young age 在年轻时。

亮点三:beloved 挚爱的。

亮点四:for the rest of their lives 余生。

亮点五:What a terrible thing it is! 感叹句表达这种病的严重性。

亮点六:So, doing something quickly for them is necessary! 主语从句结尾,句式新颖,点明主题。

亮点七: devote one’s life to … 把…献给,强烈表明作者的决心。

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