2015上海中考英语作文范文六(I want to invent_______)

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编辑点评: 2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕,今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。下文是范文,大家可参考~

I want to invent a time machine

As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learning about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learning from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I cannot only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as wellUsing a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out.

精彩亮点分析:

亮点一:定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活

亮点二:用would rather … than … 表达学生的意愿

亮点三:用if条件状语从句表达主题

亮点四:be famous for 因…而著名

亮点五:not only … but … as well 不但…而且…

亮点六:用动名词词组做主语

亮点七:用idiom突出历史的重要性

亮点八:定语从句表达学生的期待

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