2015上海中考英语作文范文七(I want to invent_______)

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编辑点评: 2015年上海中考英语考试已于今日上午圆满落幕,今年的中考英语作文题目为“I want to invent_______(我想发明__________)”。下文是范文,大家可参考~

I want to invent a flying car

It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city.It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.

I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What’s more, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great useto solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource.

Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.

精彩亮点分析:

亮点一:高分短语

亮点二:it is a must 活用高频词

亮点三:定语从句描述自己设计的汽车

亮点四:高分短语

亮点五:be of great use 名词结构更高端

亮点六:被动语态,丰富句式

亮点七: turn a new leaf of future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章

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